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桜流
玻璃棺木躺著（一堆形容詞）的___？（賓語在哪裡……）
最後少女變成貓，好可愛(*╹▽╹*)！！
怎麼能餓著貓貓呢，快給她吃的！
1 year agoReply
7’s
因為朋朋們說我很少寫描述，讓我在這作品裡多點描述，沒有考慮到賓語問題。

正式開稿我會修掉這個問題，謝謝提醒🌹

原本少女是會被變成一隻鳥，但是我成功討價還價變成貓 🤣
1 year agoReply
桜流
@7’s, 變成鳥也是相當可愛的XD 比如會唱歌的玄鳳~

寫作加油呢~
1 year agoReply
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