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海牢
會，我相信一章一章刁你大概會瘋掉，目前看起來確實連貫性不足，也有要重寫的打算，中間很多東西再回頭看確實也比較像一個人發瘋在寫，沒有思考一部小說的順序。

這陣子會花時間重塑看看，會盡力做。

感謝花時間看完，目前看起來確實需要大幅度的修改，至少有問題被建設性點出就是好事。
1 year agoReply
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