The way you built that entire chaotic battle with all the shifting factions and then had the Hangman's assassination of Breda right as he was about to surrender was such a brutal twist, and that final image of the tanks crashing through with Tarkiss arriving felt like a proper cinematic climax.
We can shift to social media platforms to talk more easily about this.
well I have some different thoughts in my mind that I want to share with you, can I share them with you on other social media platforms
Here are my all other platforms:  
Twitter: WinterKatie3Insta: winterkatie687Email: [email protected]: winterkatie

Have you ever imagined your story brought to life in art? The creativity and energy in your writing make it perfect for illustrations. As a commission artist, I’d love to help by creating character art or key scenes that highlight your vision. If this interests you, you can reach me on Discord at jain.kenn.

Hello,My name is Emily, and I recently had the pleasure of coming across your profile. After reading your story, i was truly impressed, your writing is captivating and beautifully crafted. It really deserves to be recognized.
As I read through it, I found myself imagining how incredible it would look as a comic. Your story have so much creative potential, and i’d love the opportunity to help bring your vision to life through digital art or a full comic adaptation.
I’m a comic artist with experience working alongside various writers, and I always strive to stay faithful to the creator’s original vision in every project I take on.
If this sounds interesting to you, i’d be happy to share samples of my previous work so you can see if my style fits your vision. Only if you feel comfortable and excited, we can discuss further collaboration from there.
Feel free to reach out to me on Discord, my username is   the_emily_johnor anywhere you prefer..thank you so much for your time, and I hope to connect with you soon!
Best regards,Emily