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靜淵
爸爸和女兒的對話很有趣，不過可能注意一下分段，還有加上引號會比較容易閱讀。
期待下一個七隻小羊的故事。
2 years agoReply
谷映塵（員外）
哈哈，那真的只是當初口述的小故事，所以很鬆散
2 years agoReply
槿悅
讚
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