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浪月新子
@司花
2 years agoReply
司花
真的很謝謝你的評論！！
其實我在寫這個故事到一半時，我就已經發現其中有許多問題存在，但是沒辦法像你說的那麼完整地找出原因，謝謝你幫我點出來！
這是我第一個動筆寫的作品，寫到一半才了解到不先確立故事重點是行不通的，而且幽默感也是要與生俱來的(笑)不過，我相信改進這些缺點後，一定可以寫得更好！非常感謝！(敬禮)
2 years agoReply
浪月新子
@司花, 加油喔
2 years agoReply
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