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CF LAM
如果里奈一邊戰鬥，一邊令千刃子覺醒，會否較流暢？

因為若果我是羅佩斯，可能未必會讓兩女在任意施展嘴遁--回復之術

純粹建議🙏🏻
2 weeks agoReply
星野維
會這麼寫是為了凸顯羅佩斯的傲慢，後續會用劇情塑造他的性格。
2 weeks agoReply
CF LAM
@星野維,了解 🫶

星野大大一定會為故事作最好的安排! 順帶一提, 你筆下的反派, 全部都很有魅力

而羅佩斯, 真的很令人討厭的角色, 是第一次出現在您筆下的如此令人反感的角色。 不要誤會, 這是一個稱讚, 證明你能夠駕馭各種性格的反派, 很成功呢!

我自己正在思考如何令創作的角色更加立體, 正在向這個方向精進中
2 weeks agoReply
星野維
@CF LAM,有反感就對了！羅佩斯的設計就是那種讓人討厭的反派。
角色要立體，以我目前的經驗，會比較希望凸顯角色的某種性格，讀者會對有特殊個性的角色有印象
2 weeks agoReply
CF LAM
@星野維,感謝分享👍🏻👍🏻
2 weeks agoReply
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