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阿蔥
字數剛好，劇情描述得很清楚，讓人看的出來是在描述哪一段，而且也沒有歪掉( ？)，我覺得不錯。
評論似乎越來越短，因為要縮短字數嘛！XD
以上是我正常( ？)的評論～
8 years agoReply
其實我是很想歪掉的(？)
8 years agoReply
阿蔥
@沐雪,哈哈哈……但很可惜沒歪掉( ？)
8 years agoReply
穹葉
秒針XD
25秒好快啊啊啊啊啊
結果直接讓他選擇跳樓了！
8 years agoReply

Good！
8 years agoReply
跳樓的過程也有幾秒鐘呢(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)
8 years agoReply
@沐雪,
Great！
8 years agoReply

你就是這個創作挑戰的冠軍！
（騙你的
8 years agoReply

我愛你！（文章
8 years agoReply
我愛你～(留言
8 years agoReply
@沐雪,
...........
8 years agoReply
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