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景曦
看完首篇，冒昧來看最新一章，文字優美，文筆有極大提升之餘，更帶淡淡的哀傷感。
非常有畫面感且情感張力十足；感官細節豐富，能直觀感受到當下環境變化；地下室的情節設下懸念，吸引追看。
1 month agoReply
星野維
雖然有用點ai，但基本上都是ai修完再自己修改
1 month agoReply
景曦
@星野維,不代表不是一篇好文，無礙
1 month agoReply
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