God DANG- I can tell where Artlem’s gonna be headed… and now I’m kinda excited but kinda nervous. also, quick pointer: when describing gore, it’s best to use the word “blood” less often. It can be used, but I’d say not to use it every time. Often times repetition makes the scene lose impact. Even words like “crimson liquid” or “bright scarlet” (there’s probably more, I’m listing just a couple XD) can help keep the word choice fresh. other than that though, I really liked this chapter. :)
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I can tell where Artlem’s gonna be headed… and now I’m kinda excited but kinda nervous.
also, quick pointer: when describing gore, it’s best to use the word “blood” less often. It can be used, but I’d say not to use it every time. Often times repetition makes the scene lose impact. Even words like “crimson liquid” or “bright scarlet” (there’s probably more, I’m listing just a couple XD) can help keep the word choice fresh.
other than that though, I really liked this chapter. :)