Whoa so Fae dude is dead...oh gosh. I thought he would have a role in this. Also, when Lorca shrank back when he saw her, I'm assuming it's because he didn't want her to be affected by the chain that is poisonous, right? Of course he would be shocked to see her lit on fire or embers dancing on her skin. This reminds me of that scene in the abandoned city on the mountains - Lorca's palace. Wren entered and she touched fire too, but it didn't harm her. Wow, so whatever her power is, it's showing itself (all because Fae dude released it and I think he meant to use it to his advantage too.) Are you going to elaborate more about the Faes, or if there's others or an elf powerful than the one who's dead now? 

One thing that puzzled me is that during the blanket of fog, and when Lorca, Sorcha, and Wren (why only three of them? So now it makes me think it's not a random attack but one with specific target...but by whom?) got abducted and while I can understand that Inakara and Omi's reactions was more like they were trying not to show panic, but the travelling villagers seemed as if they aren't bothered much, when earlier there was a man screaming because of the fog slithering. It just seemed like a slightly odd thing when I expected them to be fully in panic mode, and even though they did cheer up in relief. I wonder what explanation Inakara and Omi provided them so there wouldn't be chaos.

I'll refrain myself from asking other questions hahaha but these are it :o


Fascinating chapter, as always!