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嘿嘿阿嘿嘿
給太多描述，然後有一點，因為你這一篇是中文小說，我是不太能理解為啥觸控板的部分要使用英文，看起來的感覺有點差，而且全部大寫，更難閱讀，然後就是其實人名可以一開始就給出來，雖然我知道你想要讓後面的劇情喊出名字但前面就是看著一個"那個人"在搞東搞西，沒有一個專有名詞可以讓讀著帶入的。
17 hours agoReply
二鄉仁
感謝原PO！

當初是以劇本的角度發想，後來想參加比賽就轉化成影視小說。比如是以攝機角度去寫那個搞東搞西的人，當二人接近時，原來是互相認的某某~

關於英文介面，設定是未來的量子電腦系和工程筆電，我沒想到這一點，後續會減少（甚至停止）。

再次感謝你～！
17 hours agoReply
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