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SamHacker
評分：4級分
評語：其實我們都活在一個被稱為「社會」的籠子吧？但為甚麼會認為社會是一個籠子呢？正所謂枷由心生（我說的），只要你不覺得自己被囚禁著，你就是自由的。踏出自己的心牆，就能看到更廣闊的世界。
10 months agoReply
曉昱
我果然作文退步了，其實我也是這一次的會考生，會考的時候我還拿了五級分。不過沒關係，還是謝謝你
10 months agoReply
兔星塵
給你4級分中上（快5級了）~我不太會評作文啦😅！畢竟自己也不是很會寫……（真的參考就好）整體文章敘述流暢，但總覺得多加點詞藻修飾會更好？似乎有點體會到：所謂的束縛，其實只是自己套給自身的枷鎖，如果不去在乎別人的眼光，真的會活的比較輕鬆。（——by小小會考牲）
10 months agoReply
SamHacker
+1我也不太會
10 months agoReply
曉昱
謝謝
10 months agoReply
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