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涼樹
管他的，寫就對了(?
2 years agoReply
倒提壺
天下武功，唯快不破。（？）
2 years agoReply
木刻
我覺得高產路線比較適合我，我認為大多讀者會比較想快點知道劇情，多於想知道你哪一句寫了多神的對偶。

但在我看到別人的作品，用字漂亮，文筆優美，表達清晰，條理分明。我就會想

幹，我寫得太爛了
2 years agoReply
倒提壺
我已是屬於劇情比較要求但文句通順就好的讀者，有些作品文筆很美但是看完會有空虛感，這類作者我就會當作用詞範例但不會主動追新作。
2 years agoReply
深海大鳳梨
我自己會常常反覆去讀前幾章, 看到哪裡不順眼就修, 但久了發現自己這樣比較像強迫症發作 ... XD
同意用寫出來就是最後版本的心情寫，真的會比較認真～
2 years agoReply
倒提壺
我覺得不順眼就修這樣可以即時翻新，不過有時要注意會不會每次都是在修某一篇或是某幾章。如果是以要多增加完稿作品為目標的話，就會有點耗電了。
2 years agoReply
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