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哇喔！非常有趣欸～
4 years agoReply
阿賴耶
真的，很值得去看看OwO//
4 years agoReply
水無月 楓
這篇好像蠻有趣！！！
4 years agoReply
阿賴耶
這篇作品超有創意的，非常推薦入坑喔XD
4 years agoReply
水無月 楓
@阿賴耶,嗯嗯🥰
4 years agoReply
兌現藍 / Tealize
其實我卡文期間一度想把學校打掉，改成社會事件，還想過把主角變性，來提升自己想填坑的興趣(已經叫了終結者帶來拆除大隊了(住手

不過這篇評讓我決定先只改變主角的個性看看，也許主角變有趣一點，前期就不會那麼悶了？

倒設定真的好難，仔細思考後，又覺得很想做到設定用到時再解釋，但怕真的要介紹時節奏都被打斷了@@

好難！

雖然在另外一邊已經謝謝過了，但在這裡再謝一次+++

4 years agoReply
阿賴耶
嗯嗯，修改個性應該會比變性好，只要角色足夠有趣，男主女主其實關係不大(?

我也覺得作者對主角的好感度，很影響填坑的速度XDDD 畢竟如果連作者都不喜歡筆下的主角，就更難說服讀者喜歡了>< 

(順帶一提，我喜歡夏悅，低調腐女屬性滿可愛的www

倒設定真心難，可能只能邊寫邊調整了。

不客氣，一起加油！
4 years agoReply
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