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驢子公爵
哇嗚 這個時空的倒敘及先後順序很厲害
而且心裡寫照也很完整
更用了最後一句來挑起讀者的興趣
厲害！( ^_^)/~~~
4 years agoReply
宅仔
謝謝誇獎，不過這好像也有可能，不是有些說法是在說維度提升，由肉體轉為精神世界
4 years agoReply
宅仔
還有對幽浮拍照會穿越，這是之前看過的都市傳說
4 years agoReply
驢子公爵
@宅仔,我懷疑你看過老高
4 years agoReply
宅仔
@驢子公爵,別懷疑~
4 years agoReply
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