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Mitsume10

I like your idea of this story! (And the other POV)

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

Why, thank you. :3

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

@MissFransisco, I used to write for other people... So if they aren't impressed with it, I might change the whole story for them :v

9 years agoReply

Foreveraining

This is actually really good but why did he have to die? I was full on imagining a really happy ending and then bam! I'm like woah, he's dead. But it's a good story

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

I like making sad romance stories...
It makes it more amazing xD

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

I want him to die but I also want him to stay awake for a few more hours to speak to the girl... So after he said his last words, let's just say his heart stopped beating.

9 years agoReply

Foreveraining

@Jeniffer, Yeah, sad romance stories have more of an effect than normal ones, at least that's my POV.

I can't imagine it another way though. Like the ending you've made is probably the most effective. Though keep up the great work! :)

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

@MissFransisco, thankies :3
I am very glad that you do think it's the best way to end it, because I don't want to start over again x.x

9 years agoReply

Foreveraining

@Jeniffer, Haha, but just remember you write for your own self not for others. So it doesn't matter if I or anyone else isn't a fan of it; as long as you like it then no one has an say in what you write.

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

@MissFransisco, I actually never thought of it like that xD thanks~

9 years agoReply

Foreveraining

@Jeniffer, How did you think of it as? I'm actually curious. XD

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

I used to write for other people... So if they aren't impressed with it, I might change the whole story for them :v

9 years agoReply

Foreveraining

@Jeniffer, Yeah that's not good. Who cares what people think. It's your story, your rules. You can write it however you please. Anyhow, keep up the great work, you're doing really good. :)

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

@MissFransisco, Thanks~

9 years agoReply

Jeniffer

Published? Where?

9 years agoReply