A chill seriously ran through my spine in the spear scene. That was an intense read. That was so awesome. You started out strong, and the ending made me smile. Nice.
Thank you! :D Thats some high praise, to make a chill rin through YOUR murderuous mind :PIt still needs editing because some of the writing is mundane and repetitive, but im too lazy... it cuts like a whole 20 minutes off the production process.
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Thats some high praise, to make a chill rin through YOUR murderuous mind :PIt still needs editing because some of the writing is mundane and repetitive, but im too lazy... it cuts like a whole 20 minutes off the production process.
Yeah, it needs to be edited a little but I highly doubt that it would take 20 minutes.