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風格統整的很好,我可是經歷了兩次大改,然後才在書評創挑裡決定了自己的風格。
能下一子搞定風格這點已經比我好很多了⋯⋯
但我的比你更嚴重,幾乎連人物都改了很多⋯⋯(還有好多角色連名字都沒出來
關於爺爺的事,這與舊作的主角有極深的關聯,需要隨著劇情不斷推進才能說清
好啦,我知道了