I really do enjoy the fact that you give enough detail to let the reader imagine what you're saying but not enough so that csn interpret it how they think it may seems as well. Does that make sense? 🤔
An example would be when you describing the racket in the street. I thought of gang wars going down when you describe the two groups throwing down. I did feel bad for the lil ol'lady too. Mr. E is an interesting character to say the least and hes apparently taken a liking to Ms. Swan there 😅 I will say that Im curious about this silver-haired maiden. Why is she bound? I feel like shes gonna be feisty.
It makes sense and I'm really glad about what you said in the first paragraph, because that is what I aim to do! I try to be implicit. I try to "show" instead of "tell" whats going on. 😁 and oh yeah it was a gang war, happening in this crazy little city.
You'll see more about her as you read. I will say though: she is a close relative to Ladnavia 🥶 but maybe not as feisty 😳
An example would be when you describing the racket in the street. I thought of gang wars going down when you describe the two groups throwing down. I did feel bad for the lil ol'lady too.
Mr. E is an interesting character to say the least and hes apparently taken a liking to Ms. Swan there 😅
I will say that Im curious about this silver-haired maiden. Why is she bound? I feel like shes gonna be feisty.
As usual, well done, Ciro.
It makes sense and I'm really glad about what you said in the first paragraph, because that is what I aim to do! I try to be implicit. I try to "show" instead of "tell" whats going on. 😁 and oh yeah it was a gang war, happening in this crazy little city.
You'll see more about her as you read. I will say though: she is a close relative to Ladnavia 🥶 but maybe not as feisty 😳