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亡魂之筆
呃不專業意見
感覺第四句的
悄磨盡 變成 悄消磨
能押韻卻也不失意境
6 years agoReply
懿恩
謝謝指教呦，晚安舒心。
6 years agoReply
懿恩
謝謝可樂賞文呦
6 years agoReply
可樂
這意境，超美。
6 years agoReply
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