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Coen Wonder
Again, you are really good at describing small details with simple and effective phrases - I can imagine how it it feels when Jade retouch her bruise spot again! We have created a very nice hook here. Look forward to the what will happen next!
12 years agoReply
Coen Wonder
BTW, I notice you occasionally left out some punctuation marks, it this just your writing style?
12 years agoReply
MistyHunter
@Coen Wonder, Thanks Coen your compliments are appreciated :)
LOL in all honesty it's more forgetfulness then anything I'll try to remember in future Thanks!
12 years agoReply
Coen Wonder
@MistyHunter, haha no problem. :)
12 years agoReply
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