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I don't know if I like nova. I mean to punch him in the mouth just because he said her actual name she doesn't like? Like how would he of known she didn't like that name? That seemed kind of off to me.
Alef Magnus
See how I read the first chapter and commented only to see how I've already made the same Perks reference comment on this one. Bruh, this is seriously a great piece. You really got the young vibe going with this story and it felt really authentic.
Alef Magnus
Feeling a little Perks of Being a Wallflower vibe from this. Very tiny bit. Entertaining yes, and it's also the right step forward.
Andrew Knight
Having never read Perks (I've definitely heard of it though) I can't really say that it was intluenced or anything. I think that, by a couple more chapters, the similarities will cease haha
Alef Magnus
@Andrew Knight, haha It was just a really tiny bit. Like how easily you can talk about the family background of characters. Just the feel. Which is good.
Coen Wonder
Very entertaining chapter:)
Despite some grammatical errors that wouldn't be a problem with a quick fix, I like this chapter. I could imagine the scenes as I read on and the part between Nova and Andy when she kissed him and he got all flustered but happy made me aww-ed haha x)
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