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bloodandfullmoon
You are also over the word limit, so I'll have to take that into consideration. Thanks for entering!
bloodandfullmoon
Its very creative, but you could improve your writing style more. Love it, though!
SnowTheUnique
Actually, my friend is the one who write it. I added some parts, helped with character development and ideas, and also fixed her grammar (im a grammar nazi) but she doesnt want to do the story anymore, so....
bloodandfullmoon
I see. That makes more sense. Your writing isn't as cohesive as it is collaborative. Thank you so much for entering!
SnowTheUnique
@bloodandfullmoon,I mean, I could continue it but I don't feel like it. It wouldn't be the same without her.
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