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@紅葉
8 years agoReply
紅葉
好的~可以點出我的錯誤我很高興呢，會加以改進的！
謝謝評論！
8 years agoReply
@紅葉,
其實評論的時候很害怕人們會認為我評得不好呢......
8 years agoReply
紅葉
@公冶楚雲,我覺得評的不錯啊，你說的缺點其實都滿準的Ww
我自己在寫的時候也沒發現有這些漏洞ww
8 years agoReply
@紅葉,
通常都是旁觀者清吧w
8 years agoReply
紅葉
@公冶楚雲,
哈哈，好啦，還是謝謝你給我的評論哦！
說實話，還是第一次看到別人寫評論給我，幫我點出錯誤w
8 years agoReply
@紅葉,
不過其實每一篇故事我都非常喜歡呢，
能夠看到這麼好的故事實在太幸福了xD
8 years agoReply
紅葉
@公冶楚雲,XDD，雖然不覺得自己寫得好就是了w
還參考同學的意見XDD
8 years agoReply
@紅葉,
加油哦www
8 years agoReply
紅葉
@公冶楚雲,會的！大家一起加油！w
8 years agoReply
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