Really enjoyed this here personally as I fully agree with you. Love and toleration are not the same at all. One is out of care, the other is so you avoid offending someone. Love is a strong belief in my own religion as well. In terms of the writing, I especially loved the water analogy. A few grammar mishaps (typos, really). Overall though, well done.
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