This is interesting and unique though I found myself trying to Google the Norse things. With no definitions for some of the Norse things, I was a bit confused but overall great job. This story has given me more than a few drawing ideas, since it paints a picture perfect world. I didn't see any errors. I love this, keep up the great work
It's intriguing! Keep writing! Don't doubt yourself with this work, it's brilliant! I really can't say anything negative! What you could improve a bit is the intro. It irritated me at first the way you wrote there but you still get the picture. ^.^ To be honest I imagine all this in mange style somehow, is that strange or is it just me? Although I grew up 8 years in Sweden (I'm not a Swede) I know little of the legends but if you need help with the language don't hesitate to ask.
Keep writing and good luck! ^.^
Honestly, I think this is brilliant. The description and story flow so well! You should be proud of yourself. However, I may be useful to describe what these Norse things are. Perhaps a teacher somewhere the characters overheard telling students or young people. Just to give the reader a better understanding. Other than that, brilliant, keep going!
What you have here is an amazing work of art. You had me completely absorbed into the world of the protagonist and her gods. The narrative tells much like an ancient fairytale or legend and flows well. It reminds me a lot of Tolkien's work because of the style of writing and the vast world you have set up but it is much different than anything Tolkien wrote. As for more technical things such as grammar and punctuation, I didn't spot anything wrong or in need of fixing.
Keep writing and good luck! ^.^