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武．道
 
人皆以死為傷，然妳反思死後之樂，別具一格。
然而最後一句可改善。
8 years agoReply
霓詩
謝，最後一句目前尚在思考，等待想到再來寫。
8 years agoReply
武．道
@霓詩,
小貼士：
其實題目只說續寫部分字數不得多於五十字，也就是說妳總共可寫五十四字。
8 years agoReply
霓詩
@武．道,呵呵
8 years agoReply
霓詩
@武．道,沒事啊~
8 years agoReply
霓詩
⊙ω⊙”我累～不知道在寫啥～(汗
8 years agoReply
艾蓮
(*ﾟ▽ﾟ)ﾉ
8 years agoReply
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