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冷水
文筆一看就知道十分老練。幾乎沒有什麼可以挑剔的缺點、也或許是我眼力不足而導致如此。
由一件件的物品、一張張曾經的照片，讓整幅畫面變得栩栩如生。形同讓讀者進入了作者的童年一般，感受當時灑下的金黃陽光、以及那吹亂裙擺的風，抓蝦、丟手帕、編戒指⋯⋯
十分感謝妳的作品，如果有想說的也歡迎到我的留言板上留言。
8 years agoReply
霓詩
謝謝~不過我的文筆還嫩著，須多加磨練~
8 years agoReply
冷水
@霓詩,ww妳太謙虛了。
8 years agoReply
霓詩
@冷水,:)

8 years agoReply
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