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感謝妳的參與。
其實我這次的題目是在於以本身「自己」作為基準，不是以第三方的角色來闡述。
劇情很好，開頭也取的能讓人想點進去看。
但有一個小地方，也就是當人在說話的時候，加上引號「 」會比較讓人明瞭。

8 years agoReply
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Ok,感謝指點。
8 years agoReply
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