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Aru
嗯？！從難過的情緒突然變成同，我不小心笑出聲w對不起
9 hours agoReply
Quzi
哈哈哈，我也覺得這邊情緒變化超突然💀🤣（幸好沒有抓到錯字😋（？））
9 hours agoReply
Aru
@Quzi,我不是貶意www
9 hours agoReply
Quzi
@Aru,我知道啦～🤣🤣 是說我覺得這邊就是卡在一個非常好笑的段落🥸（原本是因為在脆上更新如果要吸引人到下一篇的話就要有種超大的情緒起伏然後斷在這🤣😂）
9 hours agoReply
半口雲
加書籤啦！
話說我看這篇看得亂亂的，感覺一下是第三人稱一下是第一人稱（也有可能是我看太快🤣
哇這麼快就告白了！讓人很想看下去😆
10 hours agoReply
Quzi
哈哈哈哈哈 我之後再來微微修改一下🫪🫪
因為是短篇所以進度真的超趕🌬️🤣🤣
9 hours agoReply
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