The moment Lucian said "the stories of Dawn make me feel that this mud isn't the end of everything" I literally had to stop and breathe. That line broke me in the best way possible. And then Barin's hand trembling when he recognized what Lucian's dream meant, I am not okay. The mystery, the destiny, the secret friendship between two boys from completely different worlds... this first chapter already has my whole heart. :))
I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at akiracomicart2@gm@il. com
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