Here I am at Chapter 2 with many of the same comments as your other fans; I'd simply like to get to know your characters better! I feel invested at this point, as your writing style is very similar to mine at that age; If you'd like some pointers to help mature your writing a little bit, just send me a message, I'd love to help! For now, I'll keep reading though...

Still seems great so far! I think you might want to add some more description to the characters, though, ie. what do they look like? (Also I was just wondering how you pronounce Wyghtham?)

The chapters have a consistent pace so far - good job! I wish the chapter was longer though - but that's just a personal whim as I'd like to know your characters better.

Good stuff so far! Keep up the good work!

Steampunk is a new genre for me, but I think you can continue to develop the story, especially going deeper into the characters introduced in this chapter. Keep it up!