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Wad 呀滑
我最近都遇到這個問題
3 months agoReply
夏目
show not tell的觀念會影響到故事節奏沒錯

如果篇幅都用在角色表演上面就會擠壓到原有的戲份

對於設定少的小說影響不大


對設定多的小說影響就很大了
3 months agoReply
渺兔
嘿啊，整個文本在我注意到時變得超拖沓，哈，九萬字了還沒最終決戰。
3 months agoReply
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