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akane

I've really been enjoying your story your characters and storytelling are fantastic. Honestly, I think it would work incredibly well as a manga or webtoon and could help you reach an even bigger audience. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at akiracomicart2@gm@il. com

4 weeks agoReply

Liv2263

Thanks i need someone who will do it for the love of the story not for commission.

3 weeks agoReply

annielens

I couldn’t stop thinking about your story it felt so alive so far. I have a few thoughts and ideas I’d be thrilled to share with you.

2 months agoReply

Liv2263

Sure put it in the comments for me sorry i havent been able to update the story yet. I been in classes and i dont have a lot of time to work on it.

2 months agoReply

annielens

@Liv2263, Are you available on any other social media platforms or do you have any gmail, so we can connect and discuss this further?

2 months agoReply

Moonlit_irina

The Bewitching Hour scene absolutely wrecked me. Two people quietly building something real together over coffee and a notepad, that is the romance. Atlas watching Yuki without saying a word and just knowing her? perfect!!

3 months agoReply

Liv2263

Thanks i still need to work on editing all the chapters and make them perfect

3 months agoReply

Moonlit_irina

Yeahhh but still it's perfect you know :)), and thank you for such an engaging story! I really enjoyed the depth and creativity in your writing. I'd be interested in discussing your other works as well. Would you be comfortable sharing one of your social media handles so we can continue our conversation? Alternatively, I'd be happy to provide mine if you prefer. :)))@Liv2263,

3 months agoReply

Azuramist

I loved how this chapter unfolded every moment felt alive can’t wait for more

3 months agoReply

Liv2263

Thanks i will try to get back to this story as soon as i can. Just haven’t had time to work on it.

3 months agoReply

Azuramist

@Liv2263, Ahh, no worries, I read your story and the moment they sit together planning “The Bewitching Hour” really stood out to me. Even with the coven threat in the background, there's this quiet shift where fear turns into focus and they start building instead of just surviving.When Atlas names it and Yuki immediately understands, it feels simple but really meaningful, like they’re choosing a shared future without saying it directly. It's a calm, emotional turning point that stays with you.

3 months agoReply

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