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不知餘
新的圖真的⋯很有顏色
3 months agoReply
Wad 呀滑
🥵🥵🥵🥵
覺得用兩天時間花得太值了
3 months agoReply
不知餘
很有感覺⋯會開後宮嗎？
3 months agoReply
Wad 呀滑
謝謝! 

預定應該會, 但要在一段時間之後🤔
也要考慮一下形式🤔
3 months agoReply
色心之翼
我覺現在的人多數用手機看，每個段落不宜太長。🤔
3 months agoReply
Wad 呀滑
感謝你的建議！

段落本身調過幾次，我也在尋找最好的格式🤔 
不過沒考慮到手機，真是盲點🙈
我會再拆一下

那一章會太長嗎?
3 months agoReply
色心之翼
@Wad 呀滑, 我覺得長度內容合適，不過感覺上有時詞藻太多。不過這也屬於個人風格。
3 months agoReply
Wad 呀滑
@色心之翼, 我又進一步拆細段落了，順便換了更色的第一章插圖

感謝你的實用建議！
祝你讀得愉快！
3 months agoReply
大秦書說人
好色哦
對於人類冷感了所有轉攻魔物娘🥵
3 months agoReply
Wad 呀滑
感謝！「好色」是對這個小說的最高讚美🫡
3 months agoReply
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