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亞爾斯特2號
很有韓式漫畫的風格。(以前就常看過。)
4 months agoReply
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原本想說給每一章都加一個插圖以配合劇情，但後來發現生成出來的圖不是不滿意就是畫風差異太大# 最終只能在間章插圖上下功夫。
4 months agoReply
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關於如何呈現主角此時的心境，我試了很多方法，最終只有這種如同攝影機視角一般的描述再搭配感官反應是符合的。 
畢竟如果一個人還有目標，那麼他的心其實就還沒有死，但此時的主角關心的暫時只有'活下去'。
5 months agoReply
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