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伐伐伐木工
我懂你的意思，也就是第四面牆的敘事方式。這會非~~~常破壞沉浸感。

我們是要透過文字一起徜徉在創作者編織的世界裡面，然後突然來個幾句作者吐槽或是神之視角的解說。

或是開始長篇解釋設定集!?我必須說，我是來看故事的，不是看設定集的!!!

這很常在寫奇幻類的小說的的新手看到，實在很出戲!
5 months agoReply
榨掉葡萄乾
哈哈個人牢騷居然會被發現！
5 months agoReply
榨掉葡萄乾
但我不得不說，這平台真的太多了。重點是都很熱門，我就不太理解…
5 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
@榨掉葡萄乾,我評文的時候就有發現了，並且也有點出來好幾個，不過能聽懂並且理解的其實沒幾個就是，小說不是設定集～不是作者吐槽～
5 months agoReply
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