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洗腳那段寫得太有張力了！蒙上眼睛，透過觸感和對話來展現兩人之間曖昧、禁忌又緊張的關係，畫面感十足
9 months agoReply
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【蘭芝玉樹】->前一章你用的是「芝蘭玉樹」
【心中明白，她這是有私事要告之自己，忙關上房門，熟練地跪於床榻前？】->為什麼問題結尾？
【哪个世家弟子】->簡體「哪個」。
【小沙爾】->錯字「小沙彌」。
【我心中心中知曉】->多字「我心中知曉」。
9 months agoReply
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