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陽壽木魚
心得：

看到#7+加書籤-

作者的每章長度抓的不錯，也不會訊息量過大，主角是個廢到不能再廢的廢柴，一開始沒有直接開大掛（也有可能是我還沒看到）讓人好奇他怎麼在大逃殺中生存下來的，然後部分地方的描寫（比如說人稱轉換）感覺可以更好。

總之期待後續。
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
謝謝！
關於人稱轉換的地方，其實主要也是關鍵的位置才會有，想用來區分主次的方法( 但其實就是作者本來用第一人稱寫，某些地方懶得改罷了🙃🙃
10 months agoReply
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