That was intense, the guy spent two years leading that ship, and then the committee took it away for their little experiment...I can't help but wonder what would happen next.
I wrote this off the cuff not a lot of thought gone into it but having had a proper look at it today im going to tidy it up a bit and perhaps expand it into a bigger story thanks for your comment and glad it has left you wondering there could be room for a good story to come out of this
It's okay! Minor errors here and there with punctuation and grammar but your story is solid. I didn't expect the ending at all! Really cool, I hope you'll keep on developing it :D
@Banko, you can try apps like Grammarly, they help with spelling and grammar or run your stuff through spell-checker on Microsoft Word/even google docs has a spell-checker. You could also try looking for other people to read your writing so that they can give comments and help you improve as well!
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What a way to do a concept of sending all types of pods to spread, and tricking the guy, being unsure. I really think this was great.