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榨掉葡萄乾
我是路人，隨便說說我的想法
好多表情噢哈哈，其實會有點出戲啦～建議可以用文字敘述就好🤣
對話比較混雜，一眼看過去會有點搞不清楚是誰在說話
但是第一篇我覺得可看性蠻高的（？）
9 months agoReply
柑橘味蟑螂
之后会改进的谢谢宝子夸奖
9 months agoReply
榨掉葡萄乾
@柑橘味蟑螂,加油噢～
9 months agoReply
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