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鈴鈴卷
地獄開局，重生以後這一世要認真了嗎
修仙沒有六根清淨，還惦記女色，怎麼證道成仙😢難怪只能對著性愛娃意淫。
2 months agoReply
渺兔
笑死，我還沒看過有人這樣解讀這段。
2 months agoReply
渺兔
這是一個對宏大敘事投擲莫托洛夫雞尾酒的故事。
2 months agoReply
大秦書說人
誘惑的妖尊？
4 months agoReply
渺兔
算是加寫的橋段，
因為書評人認為要吸引人目光就是要在第一章讓女主角早點登場，並且在第一章就加入性元素，我發現物理層面上女主角不可能在第一章登場，所以就設計了一個符合世界觀氣氛且有性元素的半登場方式。
4 months agoReply
渺兔
1203修稿 降低作者聲音 字數直接從4000+變成1900+
7 months agoReply
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