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夜臨 Yalin Hayami
整體還蠻容易讀的。角色部分，登場時可加點外貌特徵敘述，目前只寫服裝，人本身沒太多著墨，讀者會沒有印象，例如塞機票的員工、女主角等。

可以參考看看。

10 months agoReply
紅豆蓉
是啊！！好，謝謝你的意見。我會好好再想一下如何添加這一段 🥀
10 months agoReply
黑靈
仲謙和子寧很有緣份呢～
笑死，仲謙竟然以為她是狗仔隊🤣🤣
10 months agoReply
紅豆蓉
我覺得，謙哥是個表面成熟穩重又冷靜的人，但實質卻是個二愣子⋯⋯ 思想跳脫到脫了軌的人 ～ 
10 months agoReply
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