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瑗酒
百嘞威～～～～～他們兩個那場風暴看了好害羞阿阿阿阿阿阿阿！！！！！！
11 months agoReply
瑗酒
喜歡這篇！！！！尤其是這段好唯美：

沙發底下的地毯皺起，玻璃桌上晃動的水杯裡，映出兩人交纏的倒影——如燒盡的紙片，在黑夜中飄逸、貼合、熄滅、又重新燃起。
他終於不再壓抑自己對萬敵的渴望，像一場不肯收手的深吻，一場終於獲得允許的擁有。

我真的好喜歡這段，很有意境很有畫面，喜歡你的文筆<3
11 months agoReply
伊藤雪彥
妳留害羞結果我反而更害羞了啊嘎啊啊啊
11 months agoReply
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