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洛辭
我看得出你很有想像力，『水銀法陣』這個材料很有畫面，而且你對『英雄／誓言』的熱血感寫得很直。
6 months agoReply
明二
哪有，感謝你的讚譽，我實在惶恐不安。作為這部小說的作者，我不得不說幾句大實話，辣眼睛，沒眼看，太丟人了。自己回頭看一下都想笑。這就是我對這部小說真實的評價，純粹是高中生或是初中生閒暇之餘創作的廁紙小說。文筆稚嫩的我看了都忍俊不禁笑出來，比之唐家三少早年的《光之子》《狂神》文筆還要稀爛，情節根本經不起推敲，人物塑造一團亂麻，小說主旨壓根就沒有，主線劇情是啥我根本就不知道。
您能讚譽這部小說，我很高興，我覺得總有一天要對這部小說大修特修一番，至少讓他能令人過目。再次感謝你給這部小說做了個評價。
6 months agoReply
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