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斟墨客 。 迷
其實兩人氣氛還不錯的說ww

但是咧……有些段與段之間跳的太快，稍嫌錯愕，可能就是像分開獨立的文章，多點連貫性會比較好喔！
還有阿……排版可以在細分一點。

寫作加油ww
9 years agoReply
仃月
歐給歐給♡
謝謝留言，我會改進(=^･^=)
9 years agoReply
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