Comments - 「一句話」也可以千奇百樣第一屆 | Penana

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Comments - 「一句話」也可以千奇百樣第一屆 | Penana

Comments - 「一句話」也可以千奇百樣第一屆

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加油~加油~

4 months agoReply

很棒的劇情，悲傷感直接拉滿

情緒完全可以共情到角色之中

建議修改：

角色與場景跳躍太快給人一種讀得正起勁卻沒有下文的感覺

字數的部分還未達標 250~1000字以上哦

麻煩修改一下哦

4 months agoReply

抱歉抱歉，當下打完忘記確認字數了orz

4 months agoReply

@小春,沒事的這是一個很優秀的作品

4 months agoReply

@An安崽,已更改囉~感謝您的建議和提醒。

4 months agoReply

@小春,👍有被劇情震攝到讀完之後心臟有被揪住的感覺

4 months agoReply

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