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月一
如果像姜凝湮一樣有點孤星命，換我肯定不敢再收弟子(⁠ꏿ⁠﹏⁠ꏿ⁠;⁠)……
最後睹物思人那段很有意境！（但好悲涼😢
4 hours agoReply
雲兮玥
真•喪門星（誤
刀人成功😈🔪
2 hours agoReply
羽璇
文字遣詞真的很優美，很有古風感！

尤其是從父母死後，還有親人，可再之後卻連親人都沒了…..
那段看了真的很揪心啊！
尤其還有提說要跟敵方服軟的是怎樣啊…….傻眼
5 months agoReply
雲兮玥
謝謝喜歡~
所以難得看到姜凝湮爆氣輸出（？
5 months agoReply
原子能
回憶殺很刀，她不是沒有感情，只是不會哭，也不敢倒下，因為身後再無一人。能把悲愴感寫出來，雲兮玥大大不像高中生啊。
9 months agoReply
雲兮玥
謝謝~她的堅強是被迫的，也無人能倚靠和安慰她
9 months agoReply
Anna Liu
玥大你好！我看到第二篇了，覺得你的文字敘述好美好厲害！我平常不太看古風，但覺得你寫得很好讀且能保有古典味呢！

姜凝湮第二篇的背景敘述讓她整個很飽滿又心疼呢😭好心疼她剛硬的外表下背負這麼沈重的過去🥲
10 months agoReply
雲兮玥
謝謝喜歡~
10 months agoReply
璃末
「刺出去，來，我教你」

嗯~感覺對了（是刀子的味道，嘿嘿
11 months agoReply
雲兮玥
刀子絕對夠（？🤣
11 months agoReply
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