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Marriane

I just finished reading this and really enjoyed it, you do such a great job of pulling the reader right into Lilah’s headspace, with all the quick shifts in mood and detail that make it feel real. The hallway scenes especially felt alive, and the mix of humor with emotional moments worked really well. I’d love to ask you something about when you have a chance.

9 months agoReply

Nancy Alia

Hey there,
I just wanted to say that your writing is truly captivating. I always enjoy connecting with fellow writers, and I’d love to chat with you about your work and the creative process. Would you be open to a conversation? Looking forward to hearing your thoughts:)

9 months agoReply

Ana_bella

SO HOOKED UP FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS!

10 months agoReply

I'm not good with editing and telling people what I think. Every time I read a story, it always seems fine to me. Yet, people always find problems with my stuff. That was all through my high school life, that happened.

I guess the only thing I'll tell you is, I found a few places where I'd place a few commas or others in it, but I have a tool for that. - If you need some support for editing grammar, there is a site called LanguageTool. I use it, and it highlights blue or yellow words or phrases on what it thinks for grammar.

1 year agoReply