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阿李
大哥我來看了，我還是分不出文筆的好壞，但反正我覺得你寫的很通順啦！
2 months agoReply
子不語
歡迎！文筆先講究通順，順了之後再來求畫面，能帶給讀者畫面之後，就可以玩很多東西了～～
2 months agoReply
林谷龍
原來阿速卡痛扁古德溫的情由是這麽來的，古德溫的淫邪行徑的確是會讓阿速卡，感覺不舒服，沒錯。
5 months agoReply
子不語
是的，被古德溫徹底引爆怒氣了！
5 months agoReply
楠都月
哈士奇 wwwww 狼頭人很多語錄嘛🤣 女主什麼任務都不接的話是不是要窮了（X
8 months agoReply
子不語
狼頭人的語錄真的超級多（妳之後還會看到一堆 XD）
女主之前真的有一段時間啥任務都接不到，快餓死了。 🤣
8 months agoReply
Rika 醬
所以大大新的頭像，是綠樹小精靈嗎？
9 months agoReply
子不語
是的！！那個是阿蓮娜的圖。
9 months agoReply
Rika 醬
大大有沒有狼頭人諺語錄？　嘿嘿ＸＤ
9 months agoReply
子不語
我所知的有幾個，例如「狼頭人都只騎自己的腿。」
XD
9 months agoReply
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